Comment by Arda on Luminosity (Twilight Fanfic) Discussion Thread 3 · 2011-03-11T10:05:33.010Z · LW · GW

This could be something you already have planned, but I don't want to make any assumptions, so: I would like to hear about the eventual effects, if any, which come from Elspeth telling Magic that she loves her Mama in chapter 12.

Comment by Arda on Luminosity (Twilight Fanfic) Discussion Thread 3 · 2011-02-26T21:37:56.739Z · LW · GW

They gave him his mate's murderer, then they gave him a new mate. I think this pretty much seals Marcus' undying loyalty to the Empire.

Comment by Arda on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) Part 2 Discussion Thread · 2010-11-23T22:20:27.880Z · LW · GW

I figured out who the stranger is, but I won't spoil it :P