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Comment by seraph on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread · 2010-11-25T07:56:55.054Z · LW · GW

All right I get it, but I'm still a little uncertain about how nonchalant they were with the idea of Edward and Bella dying. But your right and I'll say no more.

So Edwards alive after all, I have to admit that I'm relived. And I have to give you props, what you've done was ingenious and opens up so many new questions. Is Alice alive? Did she also escape the room? Is Bella alive? What will Elspeth do to bring back her fathers love for her?

Oh god I should cheesy. Any way I have a question. How does imprinting work? I assume it has something to do with how wolves naturally imprint on powerful people. Although that means that Jacob imprinting on Elspeth had nothing to do with love, because if that's how it works the first non imprint wolf to see her would have imprinted on her.

And the questions about Cody, Can he morph? Can he imprint? Or does his wolf heritage not show up at all? Or was him saying hes the most boring hybrid in the world have some fact to it? I'd be a shame if it was true.

Comment by seraph on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread · 2010-11-10T03:40:39.161Z · LW · GW

Thank you for responding, I review dozens of my favorite stories and you are the first to actually respond. I'm not sure if Edward is actually dead or not, but like it or not I have to give you points for doing something no one else has ever done. I wonder how the remaining Cullens are doing with the loss of Elspeth. I mean the Cullens love family a lot right? I thought It was rather out of character to let Edward and Bella go on a suicide mission, And THEN Alice and Jasper go missing. At that point I wouldn't have let Elspeth out of the house. Some childish part of me really hopes their suffering, I mean after all "Lets let the man that has been my son for one hundred years and his new wife he loves more than life itself die, after all its dangerous, and I don't want to get hurt." And don't even get me started on Rosalie. Was I the only one that felt betrayed beyond reason during that seen? I don't know how you are going to build an army to beat the Volturi, especially your stronger version of it. Although I'd try to find someone like Eleazar and use them to find witches with useful powers.

Comment by seraph on Luminosity (Twilight fanfic) discussion thread · 2010-10-21T03:01:25.980Z · LW · GW

What I've never understood is why nobody ever rates Chelsea as a genuine target. Think about it, how many members of the guard only stay there under Chelsea's power. Marcus has defiantly been defined as one. And who else acts emotionless because of her power making them stay and act like slaves. Alec, Demetri, Reneta, they all act just as emotionless and subservient as Marcus. If I was trying to take out the Volturri I would so schedule an all out blitz to kill her. It would really help Bella out if half the Volturri guard came back to themselves and ether helps or ran after her death. And before you say that Chelsea isn't that powerful just look at how they talk about her in the book. Aro's whole strategy relies on her. Losing Alec or Jane would be an enormous loss but Aro all out depends on Chelsea forcing everyone to stay on his side.