Comment by jesus_christ_is_lord on Epilogue: Atonement (8/8) · 2010-11-04T22:41:46.253Z · score: -14 (14 votes) · LW · GW

Your story's really good, and I hope you get it published. But I suspect you might have to change the part where Samuel L. Jackson appears out of nowhere and saves humanity. You called him masculine twice. Seriously, you fail creative writing forever.