Comment by Puda Pudi (puda-pudi) on Walkthrough: The Transformer Architecture [Part 2/2] · 2020-02-23T20:54:43.585Z · LW · GW

You might want to shorten your sentences by using less of filler sentences and phrases which makes your article confusing and longer than it needs to be. Since this is a technical article and not a fictional story, it would be good if you can bring across your points in a clear and concise manner.