Comment by Sapient Coccolithophore on Avoiding Jargon Confusion · 2019-02-18T22:06:40.365Z · LW · GW

I'm not sure you can do much about this. But if you're introducing a new concept that's especially "powerful sounding", maybe

Was there supposed to be more text here?

Comment by Sapient Coccolithophore on Genetically Modified Humans Born (Allegedly) · 2018-11-28T20:25:22.995Z · LW · GW

That last word is a typo.

Comment by Sapient Coccolithophore on Boltzmann Brains, Simulations and self refuting hypothesis · 2018-11-28T10:33:24.251Z · LW · GW

You're welcome.

Comment by Sapient Coccolithophore on Boltzmann Brains, Simulations and self refuting hypothesis · 2018-11-26T20:46:26.510Z · LW · GW

Interesting post, but I found some typos:

Lets suppose, for the purposes of this post,

"Lets" should be changed to "Let's."

Whats actually going on here. We have three hypothesis.

"Whats" should be changed to "What's," at the very least. Additionally, these sentences seem off. The first one is a fragment, and it seems like they should be joined somehow.

We have three hypothesis.

Use the plural form here.

Option 2)

Did you intend to write a full sentence here?