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comment by datawitch · 2024-07-18T01:00:37.286Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
Minor typo
the Dawnbreakers rarely road this far south aside for ceremony.
I love the Storms of Steel scenes, they make me miss playing MMOs so much.
The scene with Alain was so creepy; Nora and Zaree just casually reading Alain's mind right in front of him without even a hint of self awareness...
Replies from: a littoral wizard↑ comment by a littoral wizard · 2024-07-18T01:51:59.603Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
The "infinite promise" of the early MMO era was a big part of the inspiration for the story, mixed with the early Twitch era.
Also, an exploration of what early "AI coworkers" might be like, somewhere between a piece of infrastructure and a person.
comment by a littoral wizard · 2024-08-17T02:13:10.849Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
Fixed multiple instances of truly terrible writing in Chapter 8. It somehow dodged edits in earlier passes.