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comment by jimv · 2022-03-02T10:47:11.643Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

"All our secrets will be yours. You will know all that is known about the Mind and Body, Time and Space, Prophecy and History, Love and the Divine," said Memnuela.

"That's ten divisions, plus the entrance door. The Entrance Chamber has twelve doors. What did you leave out?" said Luna.

 

Did you miss a pair of divisions out?

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comment by ADifferentAnonymous · 2022-03-03T16:58:10.351Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Memnuela alludes to a 'Death chamber' before that, so pending resolution by the author I'm assuming 'Life and Death' is the missing pair.

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-03T20:23:19.626Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

This was indeed an error. Fixed. Thank you for the correction.

comment by momom2 (amaury-lorin) · 2023-05-09T05:25:08.608Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

One us represents all. 

-> One of us represents all.

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comment by lsusr · 2023-05-16T06:15:03.197Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.

comment by Measure · 2022-03-02T16:11:28.836Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

while the Memnuela's attention

remove "the"

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-02T20:44:03.252Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.

comment by jimv · 2022-03-02T10:48:29.434Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

"Expelliarmus!*" 

Is there a rogue asterisk there?

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-02T20:44:24.749Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.