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comment by Ben (ben-lang) · 2022-08-09T17:58:22.167Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
I really enjoyed the previous Luna story and am excited to get into this one. Don't know how fiddly it is to do but it would be nice if these had the "next" buttons that the chamber of secrets ones had.
Replies from: lsusrcomment by Measure · 2022-01-12T14:34:39.433Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
Platform Ten and Three-Quarters
That explains why they didn't get through—they were one and one-quarter too high.
Replies from: tomcatfish↑ comment by Alex Vermillion (tomcatfish) · 2022-01-13T04:57:00.190Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
I believe they meant to be; they were checking for a school for "double witches" (muggle:witch :: witch:double-witch).
Replies from: Measurecomment by jimv · 2022-01-12T11:10:51.453Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
Possible typo: "... three fifth-years. The fifty-hears..."
Possible phrase left over from a previous edit: "Luna shook it."
Replies from: lsusr, istandleet, jimv, jimv↑ comment by Robert Kennedy (istandleet) · 2022-03-13T01:08:58.459Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
There is a "going going" in this chapter as well
Replies from: lsusr↑ comment by jimv · 2022-01-12T11:19:07.506Z · LW(p) · GW(p)
And around the paragraph where Fay is poking fourth years:
"Luna watched through the window.
...
Luna placed her hand over Fay's wand-hand."
It seems like Luna stayed outside, peering in through the window. Then in inside to put her hand over the wand hand.
Replies from: lsusr