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comment by benjamincosman · 2022-03-09T21:01:45.586Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

A lot of this is going way over my head. Does anyone know how much of what's going on is supposed to be possible to figure out a) just from earlier chapters, b) from other sources (original HP and HPMoR?) c) not at all until later d) not at all

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comment by supposedlyfun · 2022-03-10T02:25:43.374Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

lsusr has elsewhere stated and revealed an aesthetic/didactic/philosophical preference for ambiguity and spareness in zir prose, especially in fiction; I think the idea is that the reader should be able to infer the entire underlying story from the bits (literally) disclosed by the words, and also that the words have been stripped of non-informative stuff to the greatest extent possible without making the story unreadable. 

comment by lsusr · 2022-03-09T22:05:44.608Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Luna Lovegood and the Fidelius Curse is the sequel to Luna Lovegood and the Chamber of Secrets [? · GW]. I have combined the two sequences into a single sequence to clarify the relationship between the two stories.

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comment by benjamincosman · 2022-03-09T22:39:17.346Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Ah, remembering that exists and re-reading it definitely helped somewhat. I'm still rather lost but more manageably so :)

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comment by Richard_Kennaway · 2022-03-10T08:49:12.034Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

"I can't say as ever I was lost, but I was bewildered once for three days." -- Daniel Boone

comment by Richard_Kennaway · 2022-03-09T21:19:39.484Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

I think it's supposed to raise that question. :)

comment by Richard_Kennaway · 2022-03-09T20:57:34.440Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

"I'll tell me who informed you of me if you answer my question," said Luna.

Are all the pronouns in this the intended ones?

If a person or organization is willing to lie to you once that means are willing to lie to you.

"they are willing"

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-09T22:07:14.733Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Those were both mistakes. Fixed. Thank you for the corrections.

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comment by EniScien · 2022-03-10T13:12:47.604Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Memnuela had lied to Luna about the Fielius Charm

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-10T20:27:47.956Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.

comment by momom2 (amaury-lorin) · 2023-05-09T05:27:58.638Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Luna's mother would never sell her daughter in exchange information she could deduce for herself.

-> Luna's mother would never sell her daughter in exchange for information she could deduce for herself.

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comment by lsusr · 2023-05-16T06:14:33.448Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.

comment by zimtkerl · 2022-03-23T20:22:39.767Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

"The tentacled brain launched itself at the Memnuela"

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comment by lsusr · 2022-03-23T22:12:01.679Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.

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comment by zimtkerl · 2022-03-24T10:49:29.487Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

You are welcome. By the way, I really enjoyed delving into this work of yours, it is pleasant to read and its intricate structure provides a lot of fun. Thank you!