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comment by Gurkenglas · 2021-06-04T10:47:42.265Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

She left her wand on the bar and she didn't immediately lose? Moody must have expected her to have another wand, given that she left her wand on the bar theatrically.

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↑ comment by TheSimplestExplanation · 2021-06-04T21:07:14.573Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

She doesn't have to touch the wand. She is just that good.

comment by Mary Chernyshenko (mary-chernyshenko) · 2021-06-05T04:32:47.613Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Notice how this Moody can still be Crouch Jr.

"Are you here to take me back?" "Not yet. Not today."

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↑ comment by TheSimplestExplanation · 2021-06-05T09:56:45.285Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

I'm not sure he would be paranoid enough. Anyway this seems to be a continuation of HPMoR.

comment by Pattern · 2021-06-18T01:14:55.141Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

You respect J.K. Rowling's copyright. Harry Potter fanfiction must remain non-commercial, especially in the strict sense of traditional print publishing.

Isn't there an end date on that?

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↑ comment by lsusr · 2021-06-18T01:21:05.983Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

In theory, yes. In practice, copyrights keep getting extended.

comment by Josh Smith-Brennan (josh-smith-brennan) · 2021-06-05T03:02:42.593Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

This is so good. For simplicities sake, I will refrain from making suggestions about some of the aspects of the combat though, unless you ask. You paint a picture though!

comment by Measure · 2021-06-04T18:39:19.822Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

...she combed her Hermione's hair.

Whose hair?

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↑ comment by lsusr · 2021-06-04T18:50:28.778Z · LW(p) · GW(p)

Fixed. Thanks.